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Trades- "got to the previous series guide" should be "go to the previous series guide". Creatures- "Go to one of my clan" should be "Go to one of my clans"
My page- (don't know if this matters, but) "Les statistiques sont provisoirement désactivées mais reviendront sous peu !" should be "Statistics are temporarily disabled, but will return soon!"
"Parameters" should be settings or preferences, if I'm correct. The definition of parameters doesn't seem to fit what the page is about.
Adopting creatures-"You may have the same creature many times in the eggs you adopted, you can then trade those against creatures from members who have them more than once !" likely should be "You may have the same creature many times in the eggs you adopted, you can then trade those in exchange for creatures from members who have them more than once!"
My page- (don't know if this matters, but) "Les statistiques sont provisoirement désactivées mais reviendront sous peu !" should be "Statistics are temporarily disabled, but will return soon!"
"Parameters" should be settings or preferences, if I'm correct. The definition of parameters doesn't seem to fit what the page is about.
Adopting creatures-"You may have the same creature many times in the eggs you adopted, you can then trade those against creatures from members who have them more than once !" likely should be "You may have the same creature many times in the eggs you adopted, you can then trade those in exchange for creatures from members who have them more than once!"
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Shops-"Here you can buy everything your creatures needs" should be "Here you can buy everything your creatures need"
Everything Brush- This sentence is difficult to understand. "Its fluffy hair smooth the hair of your creatures !" I believe it should be "The soft bristles will smooth the fur of your creatures!" or "The brushes' soft bristles will smooth the fur of your creatures!". Brushes usually don't have "fluffy hair"...?
"Like all the brushes, the more you will use it and the more it will wear out, you will then need to change it !" Could be changed to "Like all of the brushes, the more you use a brush, the more it will wear out. You will then need to replace it with a new brush!"
"The bristles of the brushes are made from a rigid material which gives them the ability to polish the scales of your creatures to go dislodge even the smallest film of dust!" Should be "The bristles of the hard brushes are made from a rigid material which gives them the ability to polish the scales of your creatures and dislodge even the smallest film of dust!"
"A good comb, nothing is to untangle the knots!" could be "A good comb, used to untangle the knots!" or "A good comb, nothing else will untangle the knots!"
"Selling objects" can be "Sell objects", though it may not matter much.
"An ideal plushi against nightmares" should be "An ideal plushie against nightmares"
Everything Brush- This sentence is difficult to understand. "Its fluffy hair smooth the hair of your creatures !" I believe it should be "The soft bristles will smooth the fur of your creatures!" or "The brushes' soft bristles will smooth the fur of your creatures!". Brushes usually don't have "fluffy hair"...?
"Like all the brushes, the more you will use it and the more it will wear out, you will then need to change it !" Could be changed to "Like all of the brushes, the more you use a brush, the more it will wear out. You will then need to replace it with a new brush!"
"The bristles of the brushes are made from a rigid material which gives them the ability to polish the scales of your creatures to go dislodge even the smallest film of dust!" Should be "The bristles of the hard brushes are made from a rigid material which gives them the ability to polish the scales of your creatures and dislodge even the smallest film of dust!"
"A good comb, nothing is to untangle the knots!" could be "A good comb, used to untangle the knots!" or "A good comb, nothing else will untangle the knots!"
"Selling objects" can be "Sell objects", though it may not matter much.
"An ideal plushi against nightmares" should be "An ideal plushie against nightmares"
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Olympics-
"Add bonus to your creature, you will rise its chance to win the competition. You will find them by clicking on the banner in the upper side of the site (it appears every 15 minutes). Usually many qualities are required to win a competition, so choose carefully your bonus, they choisis donc bien tes bonus, they accumulate over time !" may be "If you add a bonus to your creature, you will rise its chance to win the competition. You will find bonuses by clicking on the banner at the top of the site (banners appear every 15 minutes). Usually, many qualities are required to win a competition, so carefully choose your bonus. They accumulate over time!"
"Add bonus to your creature before sending it to compete with others !" can be "Add bonuses to your creature before sending it to compete with others!"
"There are 3 levels of competition : Beginner for creatures with low bonuses and with not many medals yet. Intermediate for creatures with many bonuses and a significant amount of medals. Expert for creatures with a lot of bonuses, with a quite impressive prize list ! " May be changed to "There are 3 levels of competition : Beginner is for creatures with low bonuses and not many medals, intermediate is for creatures with many bonuses and a significant amount of medals, and expert is for creatures with many bonuses and includes a quite impressive prize list!"
"One participation earns one XP points to the creature. Every click on it from outside the site is count and earns XP points to your creaures ! Don't hesitate to show them on you web pages to gain more experience and go faster in the competition !" is "One participation earns one XP point to the creature. Every click on it from outside the site earns XP points for your creature! Don't hesitate to show them on you web pages to gain more experience and progress fast in the competition!
When you click on a banner, it says "Congratulations ! You just earned thise bonuses !", "thise" should be "these".
"Add bonus to your creature, you will rise its chance to win the competition. You will find them by clicking on the banner in the upper side of the site (it appears every 15 minutes). Usually many qualities are required to win a competition, so choose carefully your bonus, they choisis donc bien tes bonus, they accumulate over time !" may be "If you add a bonus to your creature, you will rise its chance to win the competition. You will find bonuses by clicking on the banner at the top of the site (banners appear every 15 minutes). Usually, many qualities are required to win a competition, so carefully choose your bonus. They accumulate over time!"
"Add bonus to your creature before sending it to compete with others !" can be "Add bonuses to your creature before sending it to compete with others!"
"There are 3 levels of competition : Beginner for creatures with low bonuses and with not many medals yet. Intermediate for creatures with many bonuses and a significant amount of medals. Expert for creatures with a lot of bonuses, with a quite impressive prize list ! " May be changed to "There are 3 levels of competition : Beginner is for creatures with low bonuses and not many medals, intermediate is for creatures with many bonuses and a significant amount of medals, and expert is for creatures with many bonuses and includes a quite impressive prize list!"
"One participation earns one XP points to the creature. Every click on it from outside the site is count and earns XP points to your creaures ! Don't hesitate to show them on you web pages to gain more experience and go faster in the competition !" is "One participation earns one XP point to the creature. Every click on it from outside the site earns XP points for your creature! Don't hesitate to show them on you web pages to gain more experience and progress fast in the competition!
When you click on a banner, it says "Congratulations ! You just earned thise bonuses !", "thise" should be "these".
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This doesn't matter much, but in a sentence, there should not be a space between words and punctuation like exclamation marks, question marks, and periods.
Incorrect sentence: "I have collected all of the creatures !"
Correct sentence: "I have collected all of the creatures!"
I don't know if it is possible to change this only in the English version, but at the bottom of the page "Gothicat World" est édité par Melusim SAS - Version 2.0 BETA - Optimisé pour Firefox, Chrome, Internet Explorer 8, 9 ©Juin 2010 - February 2014" is ""Gothicat World" is published by Melusim SAS - Version 2.0 BETA - optimized for Firefox, Chrome, Internet Explorer 8, 9 June 2010 - February 2014"
Incorrect sentence: "I have collected all of the creatures !"
Correct sentence: "I have collected all of the creatures!"
I don't know if it is possible to change this only in the English version, but at the bottom of the page "Gothicat World" est édité par Melusim SAS - Version 2.0 BETA - Optimisé pour Firefox, Chrome, Internet Explorer 8, 9 ©Juin 2010 - February 2014" is ""Gothicat World" is published by Melusim SAS - Version 2.0 BETA - optimized for Firefox, Chrome, Internet Explorer 8, 9 June 2010 - February 2014"
Again, apologies for so much text! I would love to help and try to fix some errors!
I sincerely thank everyone who has made the English version possible. I would not be playing if there was not an English version! (: